Lyrics composed by Yvonne Foong,
Pin Yin translated by Elaine
Will you help compose the music?
æ¯? 一 天 看 ç?€ 天 空 çš„ å½± å?
Mei yi tien kan zhe tien kong de ying zhi
心 ä¸ çš„ 一 切， å·² æˆ? æ•… 事
xin zhong de yi qie, yi cheng gu shi
云 上 çš„ 星 å ¡ 多 么 美 好
yun shang de xing bao duo muo mei hao
疼 爱 和 关 怀 永 � 足 够
Teng ai he guan xin yong bu zhu gou
过 去 å¾— 痛， ä½ ä¸? æ„¿ 忘 è®°
Guo qu de tong, ni bu yuen wang ji
é— ç?€ çš„ 眼 从 æ¤ ä¸? 清
Bi zhe de yan cong ci bu qing
� 愿 抛 弃 更 完 美 的 以 �
Ling yuen pao qi gen wan mei de yi hou
爱 错 的 痛 没 人 能 �
Ai cuo de tong mei ren neng shuo
关 怀 � 爱 也 � 能 动 心
Guan huai bien ai ye bu neng dong xing
æ— æ³• 了 解 å?Ž æ‚” çš„ 勇 æ°”
WU fa liao jie hou hui de yong qu
虽 然 累 的 心 � 应 该 放 弃
SIU RAN lei de xing ling ying gai fang qi
疼 爱 和 关 怀 永 � 足 够
Teng ai he guan huai yong bu zhu gou
过 去 çš„ 痛， ä½ ä¸? æ„¿ 忘 è®°
Guo cu de tong, ni bu yuen wang ji
é— ç?€ çš„ 眼， 从 æ¤ ä¸? 清
Bi zhe de yan, cong ci bu qing
� 愿 抛 弃 更 完 美 的 以 �
Ling yuen pao qi gen wan mei de yi hou
i have a few suggestions:
line 1: mei yi tian kan zhe tian kong de ying zhi( shadow)
line 6: bi zhe de yan (the eye that is shut, sounds better than guan zhe)
line 12: teng ai de guan xin YONG bu zhu gou ( means it will never be enough)
still needs a bit of polishing.. some bits don’t quite make sense, but keep it up
Thanks Sabrina! Good suggestions you have there. i am not a native mandarin speaker. I learned mandarin by rationalizing official cantonese.
First line: Ying zhi makes more sense than qing si, indeed.
Sixth Line: oh my friend put guan zhe? I wrote gai zhe. But yes, bei zhe is better.
Twelve Line: Yong bu zhu gou is aiyah ofcourse better lah. LOL!
haha, now it sounds like some soapy ( sometimes darn ultra sorrowful) Mandarin songs, sung by maybe Fish Leung or something..
cheerios
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Perhaps I could put this into notes and chords. If someone can give me the characters…….. *sighs*
Or wait, has the tune already been written ??