Yvonne Foong: Fighting NF

Article: 爱错的痛

August 05th, 2006 | Category: Poetry

Lyrics composed by Yvonne Foong,
Pin Yin translated by Elaine
Will you help compose the music?

� 一 天 看 � 天 空 的 影 �

Mei yi tien kan zhe tien kong de ying zhi

心 中 的 一 切， 已 � 故 事

xin zhong de yi qie, yi cheng gu shi

云 上 的 星 堡 多 么 美 好

yun shang de xing bao duo muo mei hao

疼 爱 和 关 怀 永 � 足 够

Teng ai he guan xin yong bu zhu gou

过 去 得 痛， 你 � 愿 忘 记

Guo qu de tong, ni bu yuen wang ji

闭 � 的 眼 从 此 � 清

Bi zhe de yan cong ci bu qing

� 愿 抛 弃 更 完 美 的 以 �

Ling yuen pao qi gen wan mei de yi hou

爱 错 的 痛 没 人 能 �

Ai cuo de tong mei ren neng shuo

关 怀 � 爱 也 � 能 动 心

Guan huai bien ai ye bu neng dong xing

无 法 了 解 � 悔 的 勇 气

WU fa liao jie hou hui de yong qu

虽 然 累 的 心 � 应 该 放 弃

SIU RAN lei de xing ling ying gai fang qi

疼 爱 和 关 怀 永 � 足 够

Teng ai he guan huai yong bu zhu gou

过 去 的 痛， 你 � 愿 忘 记

Guo cu de tong, ni bu yuen wang ji

闭 � 的 眼， 从 此 � 清

Bi zhe de yan, cong ci bu qing

� 愿 抛 弃 更 完 美 的 以 �

Ling yuen pao qi gen wan mei de yi hou

5 comments

5 Comments so far

  1. sabrina August 5th, 2006 9:34 pm

    i have a few suggestions:

    line 1: mei yi tian kan zhe tian kong de ying zhi( shadow)

    line 6: bi zhe de yan (the eye that is shut, sounds better than guan zhe)

    line 12: teng ai de guan xin YONG bu zhu gou ( means it will never be enough)

    still needs a bit of polishing.. some bits don’t quite make sense, but keep it up :)

  2. Yvonne August 5th, 2006 10:35 pm

    Thanks Sabrina! Good suggestions you have there. i am not a native mandarin speaker. I learned mandarin by rationalizing official cantonese.

    First line: Ying zhi makes more sense than qing si, indeed.

    Sixth Line: oh my friend put guan zhe? I wrote gai zhe. But yes, bei zhe is better.

    Twelve Line: Yong bu zhu gou is aiyah ofcourse better lah. LOL!

  3. sabrina August 6th, 2006 7:46 am

    haha, now it sounds like some soapy ( sometimes darn ultra sorrowful) Mandarin songs, sung by maybe Fish Leung or something.. :)
    cheerios

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  5. troisnyxtienne August 30th, 2008 10:57 am

    Perhaps I could put this into notes and chords. If someone can give me the characters…….. *sighs*

    Or wait, has the tune already been written ??

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